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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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I like the depth to the image, the way there is continuity with the mountains fading into the back. Not too much detail but enough that I can easily tell what it is. I like how you incorporated mist throughout parts of the piece. I quite like the textures of the grass and the sky, very nice.
A suggestion I could make is where the lightning hits the ground, you can have a sort of glow just around that little piece, or even a small flame that may have broken out. It really adds a little extra personality..or flair to it, y'know
One other thing is that the mountain on the right looks slightly odd to me. Not too sure what it is, but at first glance the burnt patches or scraped areas of brown are a bit distracting, the shapes etched into it are almost predictable in a sense..I hope that made sense
Nevertheless, I really like the composition and the varying shapes of the mountains. My eyes are able to run over the piece and enjoy the view I'm looking at. I especially like the composition because of the motion of the piece. There's breeze blowing, a storm overhead, so I can really visualize an actual scene occurring. I love the little guy in the corner, really gives the piece some life.
I also quite like your speedpainting style.
Of course, I myself am no pro at this stuff. I'm still learning and learning by observation is very helpful, and I like giving my feedback and thoughts to others ^^
Love, Bronte